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It was my 18th birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our teenagers, so my parents held a
birthday party for me at home. With my parents and some of my good friends attend my birthday party,
I really had unforgettable experience. We sang songs, dancing and played games together. We all
enjoyed ourselves very much. During the party, my parent told me that from then on I was no longer a
child and an adult. They also said I should be more independent and responsibly. Hearing their words, I
was greatly encouraged. It was just in that moment when I felt I was a grown-up.3
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