答案:
Dear Wang Lin,
I am terribly sorry that you have been ill for a few days and I hope that you will get well soon. You often stay up late at night, which is really a bad habit. Staying up has done great harm to your health and I hope that you can give up the bad habit.
To keep healthy, you should have enough sleep and take regular exercise. Taking proper exercise can make you active and keep you fit. In addition, you should eat a balanced diet, which is helpful to your health.
Your,
Li Hua
题目分析:本文属于提纲类作文,是安慰生病的对方。文章的要点都已经给出来了,在写作的时候要包括所有的要点,不要有任何的遗漏。要使用合适的连接词来连接各个要点,使之成为一个整体,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型让文章更有档次。
点评:本文属于提纲类作文,关键是抓住要点,要使用合适的连接词来连接。同时要变换使用多种句式,提高文章的档次。