短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有
10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏词符号, 并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 划掉.
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Zhou Lu,
I'm writing a letter ask you for some help.
As you know, Zhang Fei and I used to be good friend. However, on one day, Zhang Fei read my
private letter in secret and tell others what was written in it. Knowing this, I was extreme angry. I told
her I would not be his friend any more. Hearing whatＩsaid, Zhang felt very surprised and no longer
stayed with me. Facing with this, I felt very upset. I am much angry with her improper behaviour, but I
can't forget the wonderful time that I stayed with her. I wonder whether I should forgive her. And I'm
afraid if I offer to make friends with her, she will refuse me. How should I do?
Your friend,
Li Hua