短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作

问题：

短文改错。

     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中

共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

     增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

     删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

     修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

     注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

                 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

     As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But because of

the financial crisis, the situation of the employment has become very serious. Consider this, some people

suggest graduates should have a lower career expectation, such as working in the western areas of China.

I in favor of this idea. Firstly, compared with the big cities, the competition is not as fierce there, but

graduates can easy get a job. Secondly, the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all,

going to the west  bring more benefits. Devote yourself to the west, for it is both good for our personal

development and for our country at present.

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