短文改错 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文

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短文改错

     假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文

中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：

      1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

     As an ancient Chinese saying goes, “He who travels far knows many.” In my opinion,

modern life is impossible without travelling. For me, there are two kinds of travelling attract me

a lot. Travelling on foot bring me many benefits, it can make me enjoy my holidays and many

different life styles, knowing other culture. In addition to, reading is other kind of travelling. It

can bring me to places where I can not go for the time problem. The places I have been to and

the places I only travel on books both impress a lot on me. Now would you like to share me

with your experience of travelling? Looking forward to your story.

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