第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分） 第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分,满分

问题：

第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）

第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分,满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下写出该词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

The first time I went to swim was from about 5 years ago. Many friends could swim well and they often laugh at me. So I decided to swim as well as we did. One summer afternoon, the weather was amazed, so I thought it was good for swimming. Thus, I came to the pool but found many boys were already there. I was afraid and did not know what to do. Just as I was wondering, I felt somebody give me a push and I was dropped. Frightened in the water, I wouldn’t help crying. “Help, help! ” I heard some laughter from opposite side. I tried to keep myself balance, only to find the water was just a little above my knee.