短文改错。 假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作

问题：

短文改错。

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加; 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除; 把多余的词用斜线划掉。

修改; 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意;

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

     After watch "English TV" last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and told him to go to see

a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned to school to do our lessons. While we are

having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr. Liu, my head teacher. He told me that we had made some

progresses in English, but my Chinese lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested

I must read more and keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading

newspapers would do me well for improving composition writing. That was really good idea! What they

said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.

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