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A Visit to Hangzhou
Last week, my parents and I got up earlier in order to visit Hangzhou. It took us two hours to get there by direct flight .
After we arived , first we went to the West Lake which made Hangzhou famous for. It was a place which had natural beauty. The view was very beautiful in a whole year. I enjoyed the music fountain,it sounded wonderful.
On the second day,we visted Hangzhou Amusement Park. We not only watched the show of dolphins and bired but also took many pictures.
On the third day, we went to Lingyin Temple. Then we went shopping. My mother liked that day best and bought a lot of presents for our relatives and her friends.
On the fourth day,we went to a seafood restaurant and tasted some local delicous food.
That was a very interesting traveling there.I will never forget it.
题目分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者主要去杭州旅行的经历，全文以一般过去时态为主。
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