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Not long before, a new policy aroused a heated discussion that the mark of English will be reduced from 150 to 100.
As a student, in my opinion, it is of the same importance to learn Chinese and English well. We Chinese certainly should learn our mother language well. At the same time, English is an international language and tool. We should master it better to know about the world and learn advanced technology abroad to serve our motherland. What’s more, as China is developing quickly, we have more chances to communicate with foreigners in English.
In a word, whether the mark of English will be reduced or not, we students should learn it well.
题目分析:这是一篇给材料作文,说出自己对高考英语分值下降的看法。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:it is of the same importance to......;We Chinese certainly should......;English is......;as China is ......及whether the mark of English will be......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意运用提供的参考词汇。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了一项新政策:高考英语将由150分降为100分,接下来介绍自己对这项政策的看法,最后无论如何都要学好英语。此处用了of the same importance,know about,have more chances to ,communicate with等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。