答案:
Hi! Jim,
I’m glad to hear from you. I love all the teachers in my school. My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang.
She is a hardworking and experienced music teacher. She loves music, she loves her job, and she is always patient with her students.
She encourages me to follow my dream of music. She often tells me the most important thing in our life is to be an honest and responsible person. She says love can make music more beautiful. She has great influence on me, and I want to be a person like her.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目分析:这是一篇英语提纲的给材料作文。要求介绍你最喜欢的老师,老师的性格特征及你为什么喜欢她。主要用到一般现在时,注意第三人称单数形式。
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